一篇英语文章,初2帮我看看有没病句Keep healthyAs we know,health is more important than wealth.Everyone wants it very much,especially somebody,they are sick and unhealthy.what should we do to keep healthy?first,we should do more exercise,

一篇英语文章,初2帮我看看有没病句Keep healthyAs we know,health is more important than wealth.Everyone wants it very much,especially somebody,they are sick and unhealthy.what should we do to keep healthy?first,we should do more exercise,
一篇英语文章,初2帮我看看有没病句
Keep healthy
As we know,health is more important than wealth.Everyone wants it very much,especially somebody,they are sick and unhealthy.what should we do to keep healthy?
first,we should do more exercise,such as,play basketball,play soccer,and so on.second,we should eat fresh fruit and vegetables,and less meet.third,we must have some good habits,such as,change clothes often,wash our hands before meals.finally,often open the window so that keep the air circulating and we don't have to open it all the time.And we don't smoke,don't eat bad food,don't drink too much,because they may cause desease.
This is my advice.I hope every bady can healthy!
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一篇英语文章,初2帮我看看有没病句Keep healthyAs we know,health is more important than wealth.Everyone wants it very much,especially somebody,they are sick and unhealthy.what should we do to keep healthy?first,we should do more exercise,
有几处语法错误,帮你改一下.要求加分.
英语中列举通常会用firstly,secondly……等等副词的形式,与结尾用finally对应.
题目：Keep Healthy
As we know,health is more important than wealth.Everyone wants to get it very much,especially those who are sick and unhealthy.what should we do to keep healthy?I have the following advice for this question.Firstly,we should do more exercises,such as playing basketball,climbing,running and so on.(不要连续用两个play,英语中忌重复,and so on 前不要加逗号）Secondly,we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less meat.Thirdly,we should (慎用must)keep some good habits,such as changing clothes in time,washing our hands before having dinners.Finally,it is a good way to keep the air circulating to open the window regularly.(下句不要)besides,keeping away from smoking and wine is also a good habit for our health.
This is my advice.I hope everybody can keep healthy forever!

应该是keep health不是healthy
meet打错了吧///....meat
建议你把那个change clothes often去掉．．．这个有点chinese english了。。。不好
还有disease不是desease
can be healthy
作文里的Chinese English有点多。。。下次要注意哈~~~

楼上的乱说,明明keep healthy 就是对的

语病挺多的。。。。改了就不成样子了。。。

哇，错误忒多勒…

没办法,语病多到没心情改,贼垃圾勒……