作业帮大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,能拿多少分?大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,作文满分是10分,能拿多少分?On Saturday,I am always busy.I have breakfast at 8:00am at home.And at 9:00am,I have piano le
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大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,能拿多少分?大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,作文满分是10分,能拿多少分?On Saturday,I am always busy.I have breakfast at 8:00am at home.And at 9:00am,I have piano le
大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,能拿多少分?
大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,作文满分是10分,能拿多少分?
On Saturday,I am always busy.
I have breakfast at 8:00am at home.
And at 9:00am,I have piano lessons at school.
I have lunch at 12:00 in hotel.
I see a film at 3:00pm in Hongxiang Cinema.
And at 7:00pm,I watch TV at home.
I read some books at 10:00pm in my bedroom.
So I am always busy,but I like Saturday very much!
有错误请指出来
这也不能怪我啊,试卷上给了一个表,让我按照表写啊
大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,能拿多少分?大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,作文满分是10分,能拿多少分?On Saturday,I am always busy.I have breakfast at 8:00am at home.And at 9:00am,I have piano le
I have lunch at 12:00 in a hotel.
I see a film at 3:00pm in the Hongxiang Cinema
Though I am always busy,I like Saturday very much!
注意时态,可能全要用过去时
我给6分
作文似乎太乏味了吧！！建议改改！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
看得我笑死了。。。太可爱了这孩子
hotel改成restaurants
Saturday,I am always busy.
I have breakfast at 8:00am at home.
And at 9:00am,I have piano lessons at school.
I have lunch at 12:00 in hotel.
I see a film at 3:00pm in Hongxiang Cinema
不错
太差了,要我英语老师改你这作文,5分差不多没了,太单调了,没意思