帮我看看有没有语法错误 Obviously,from the cartoonist's perspective,much of this,understandably,wishes to draw more attention to the loft character of the gallant girl.From my part,I have the idea that we should take the girl for an example

帮我看看有没有语法错误 Obviously,from the cartoonist's perspective,much of this,understandably,wishes to draw more attention to the loft character of the gallant girl.From my part,I have the idea that we should take the girl for an example
帮我看看有没有语法错误
Obviously,from the cartoonist's perspective,much of this,understandably,wishes to draw more attention to the loft character of the gallant girl.
From my part,I have the idea that we should take the girl for an example,carry forward the spirits of helpness and goodness .
The reason for this lies,of cause ,firstly,in the necessary of building a harmonious society.
Only everyone of us take ready to help others for a just case,be positive to be a good samaritan,can form a good atmosphere inthe whole society,which is not only good for develping society,but also benifical for enhancing individual's quality and spirital level.
In addition,another reason closed to the first one,is,as helping others is the traditional virture of our country,the priceless spiritual wealth,the soul of our country,and the fundation of our nation,we should speak on them with a great familiarity ,and carry forward it .
No country can live if it attempt to deviate from the theme of helpness/goodness.there are about tow reason behind my belief .First and foremost ,in this hedonism and money first-thought society,with few exception,we need more brave deeds,more valiants.Secondly ,be positive character into the massorete of our traditional spirits,strengthen personal morality is our's obligatory responsibility and duty.

帮我看看有没有语法错误 Obviously,from the cartoonist's perspective,much of this,understandably,wishes to draw more attention to the loft character of the gallant girl.From my part,I have the idea that we should take the girl for an example
from the cartoonist's perspective可以改为 from the cartoonist's point of view 更地道
everyone of us 改为each 或者直接用everyone
take ready 改为is ready ,be ready to do
a just case后面的逗号用and 连接更好,因为你后面是can
tow reason 改为two ,拼写有误
money first-thought 可以改为money worship拜金主义

Obviously,from the cartoonist's perspective,much of this could be understood that they wish to draw more attention to the loft character of the gallant girl.
From my part,I think we should take th...

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Obviously,from the cartoonist's perspective,much of this could be understood that they wish to draw more attention to the loft character of the gallant girl.
From my part,I think we should take the girl for an example,carry her goodness forward.
The reason for this lies,of cause ,firstly,for the necessary of building a harmonious society.
anyone of us is ready to help others for a just case,be positive is to be a good samaritan, can form a good atmosphere inthe whole society,which is not only good for develping society,but also benifical for enhancing personal quality and growth of the human spirit
In addition,another reason closed to the first one is,as helping others is traditional virture in our country,the priceless spiritual wealth,the soul of our country,and the fundation of our nation,we should speak on them with a great familiarity ,and carry forward it .
No country can live if it attempt to deviate from the theme of helpness/goodness.there are two reasons support my point.First and foremost ,in this hedonism and money first-thought society,with few exception,we need more brave deeds,more valiants. Secondly ,positive character into the massorete of our traditional spirit,strengthen personal morality is our obligatory responsibility .

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